How would character-sketch-of-opposite-you behave in a bar, just before closing, as an annoying little woman mocked your imperfections -- like all women assumedly did? Here we go:
An ever-changing string of adjectives and thoughts that define me is:
Optimistic, Empathetic, Romantic, Honest, Hard working, Reliable, Stubborn, Scientific/Technical, Worrisome, Sacrificing, Inhibited, and Blue...as in Cobalt Blue.
And now for the Opposites:
Pessimistic, Selfish, Hardhearted, Ordinary, Dishonest, Fickle, Simple, Assured, Resisting, Confident, and Red...as in Bloodshot Red.
He was the only one left in the bar...a freakin' thirty more minutes to lock up. The bartender hated looking the man's way -- the guy was creepy. The bartender kept himself busy, as all bartenders do, to shut out the ugliness that greeted him every night. And this man's the ugliest. He counted the shot glasses, locked up the new whisky under the bar in the not-so-secret cabinet behind the trash can, and then grabbed a bucket to scoop out the ice out of the bin that stupid Ed clogged up again.
He did a double-take; thought he saw the creep reaching into his coat pocket. Yep. The man tossed a fifty dollar bill on the bar counter; the half-folded bill teetered half off the edge, caught by a smeared ring of beer. The man's glass was empty, but he clutched it with his thick, grease-stained hand and kept it directly under his pointed, unshaven chin. The bartender exhaled, dumped the brown ice on the floor over the drain. He leaned around to pick up the bill between the tips of his fingers like he was working a pair of forceps.
He turned his back on the slouching smudge who, for two hours straight, sat at the bar and stared into his mug, saying not one word, save for that strange teeth grinding frown he formed every thirty or forty seconds, as if he were whispering the same words over and over again. Damn the Rich was the bartender's best guess. The bartender slapped the fifty on top of the register and scooped the last bucket load of ice, poured it over the pile of ice, soggy lettuce, and bacon bits over the drain. Something about 'damn the rich.'
The bartender didn’t care to know what the freak was muttering. Half the people who come here are mental. He just wanted the guy to leave. The man was large, bull-chested; he wore a pair of screw you to eternity eyes that were bloodshot and squinty before he had his first beer. And he reeked in armpit sweat and a kind of metallic stench. A wielder? His brown coat was smudged in oily rust that looked more like blood smears than engine goo. Mechanic, or trucker. His hair was a thick coppery brown, slicked back in Brylcreem, and looked like he fell out of the Sixties. Damn the rich…damn the rich. I hear ya, buddy.
His girlfriend was the one who pointed it out when she came in an hour ago to pick up his tips and to nail down the exact time when he was gonna close this sit-n-spit down. A slow night, she knew; had two drinks while he looked over delivery. "It's Mitch. Yeah. Damn it Mitch." she insisted; her whisper a bit louder than the bartender appreciated. Just tell the freak to leave, she demanded; but he knew that she knew better. She scoffed, jumped off the barstool, and swiped her long blond hair off her shoulder. "I'll be in the car. Don’t try to call; I’ll be talking to Jenna." But before she left, she turned in the doorway and broadcasted, "Aw, Damn it Mitch!" The bartender was not amused; pretended to not hear her.
BANG, BANG, BANG!
The creepy guy punched the bar three times; the ashtrays shook off their stack, and the bartender whipped around in a panic. The man's fist lay on the bar, his thick middle finger pointing over the e of the bar; pointed straight at the bartender and his grimace never leaving his beer mug; the side of eye a rage of red. The bartender took in a deep breath, stared at the finger, even shook his head as he tried to figure out what the hell -- transfixed his gaze on the man's episodic lip curling. Killed. It’s killed that bitch.
The fifty dollar bill.
"I'm getting it, buddy." He heard himself say as he turned to open the cash register. He sat the fifty dollar bill in one of the drawers -- wasn't sure which one, his hand was shaking-- and pulled out a twenty, then a five; felt his forehead start to sweat; couldn't remember the tab and wondered if he should just give the whole fifty back. He closed the drawer and stepped toward the man -- tossed the fifty next to the still pointing fist -- and kept walking towards the kitchen. He took the corner and leaned over the stainless steel sink; bleach from the mop water filling his lungs.