Yeah, I need sleep. So, here's an excerpt from my prologue.
Light from the single sconce outside spilled across the floor but failed within a few feet of the threshold. Beyond that, lay darkness like that of a long forgotten crypt. The cool air gave the stone beneath his feet an edge that sent a shiver through him. Somewhere ahead of him, a single drop of water struck the surface of something larger. The sound, though minute in the world above them, magnified to a shout in the lightless silence.
“Are
you sure this is the right room?” asked Branwen.
Even
at a whisper, her voice sounded unnaturally loud. Darby nodded. Silently, he
took a few steps forward until he was enfolded into the dark. He heard the soft
pat of her bare feet as she followed him.
“We
didn’t even bring a candle. How are we supposed to see it?”
“Just
stay here,” he replied.
Feeling
his way with his feet, Darby shuffled forward until his toes brushed the ragged
edge of the stone where it met water. Reaching down, he slipped his hands into
a hidden pocket within the sleeve of his shift. His fingers closed around three
smooth stones and drew them out. A faint glimmer reflected off their glass like
surface hinting at a deep green color. He hefted them in his hand, feeling the
surprising weight of the thumbnail width stones as they clicked sharply
together in his palm. After taking a steadying breath, he knelt and plunged his
hand into the cold water.
“Mother
Ilora, please let this work,” he whispered into the dark.
Within
moments, small points of light began to float into existence within the water.
Iridescent blues and greens swam in lazy patterns, awoken from necrotic slumber
as the disquiet from Darby’s churning hand and clicking stones spread outwards.
Darby heard her gasp softly as the lights grew steadily brighter. He smiled,
savoring a moment of satisfaction at having impressed her, and then pulled his
hands from the water. Standing, he watched as the once dark surface emanated a
phantasmal glow that illuminated the entire cavern.
Grey
walls, infused with streaks of red and orange, reached upward; their undulating
surface arching upwards to form a vast expanse. Veins of cupric stone meandered
across the walls, each with seams of knobbled rock frozen in the act of
falling. A damp sheen covered all, reflecting and magnifying the light from the
lake below. For it was a lake, that spread outward beyond where Darby could see
with only the reflected light hinting at the depths that the far shore reached.
The waters were placid now as the ripples dissipated into the furthest reaches
of the cavern. So still was the water now, that the stone that formed the roof
of the cavern and all its pendulous character was reflected in surreal
perfection.
He
turned and held his hand out to her. She dashed over to him taking his hand
into hers. Darby smiled as her fingers entwined with his. With a gentle tug, he
took a step towards the water, nodding his head to encourage her to follow.
She
resisted. “You know I can’t…,” she said pulling against him.
“It’s
alright,” he said letting go of her hand. “Watch.”
He
took a step out onto the surface of the water. Step after step he strode outwards until he was nearly halfway across. He turned and beckoned
to her silently. Branwen stood at the edge, and for the first time since they
had met at the gentle age of five, he saw doubt in her eyes.
“But…,”
she said hesitantly. “You can’t use the Féyr. How…how are you doing this?”
“Not
everything need be about the Féyr.” He held out his hand and said, “Trust me
this once and take the step.”
She
paused for the span of three breaths before hesitantly lifting her foot and
placing down onto the surface of the water. Darby smiled as the realization of
the illusion dawned on her. He wiggled his toes, feeling the cool, black rock
of the walkway set a finger’s width below the water. Branwen laughed as she
dashed down the path, the splash of her steps echoing through the chamber. When
she reached him, she took both of his hands into hers and pulled him close. She
leaned in touching her forehead to his, her face mystic in the ethereal light.
Darby’s heart raced at their closeness. His breath quickened at the look in her
eyes that was far from doubt.
As I always point out, Mike: Your fantastical writing is a painting. A fantastic painting of prose, scene, conflict, thought, and beauty.
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