Showing posts with label prologue. Show all posts
Showing posts with label prologue. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 31, 2016

Don't Judge a Book By Its Prologue

I wasn't going to write more about prologues, but here goes.

As a critic (unprofessional) and self-proclaimed rhetorical guru, I know a bad prologue.  I've read my fair share.

The worst was probably a self-published book I picked up in Belize.  Between the prologue and the epilogue, nothing really happened in the book.  The drug bust, hurricane, and murders all took place in the frames. The middle portion wasn't very interesting, but I can't say that I bought the book for the plot.  Mostly, I bought it for the creole language and to support the slim art community in Belize.

Other examples of bad prologues are out there.

However, when I sit down to read a mystery or science fiction book or other "beach book," I recognize prologues for what they are.  In classic literature, prologues are going to be good, framing devices.

And generally speaking, I enjoy reading prologues.  They draw me in.  They are cliff-hangers.  They introduce the crux of the plot.

As a critic and a writer, I see the negatives of writing prologues.  I carefully avoid them.

As a reader, I generally enjoy them--even if I can see the hands of the puppeteer a bit.  I know what the writer is doing, and I'm okay with it.

Any thoughts?

Tuesday, May 17, 2016

Who Said No Prologues?

I don't really know how this controversy began, but someone in the last 30 or so years began saying that prologues were bad.

Or maybe not bad.

Overused.

Here are the reasons I can see that prologues can be bad:

1. Using prologues to tell backstory instead of doing the work to reveal the backstory within the narrative.  Revealing backstory is more difficult, and opening with a "chapter" that gives this backstory is easier, but not more graceful.  This is sort of like an information "dump."

2. The intention is to draw the reader in with a cliffhanger opening.  Huh.  Isn't that what a good novel should do anyway?

3. The intention of the prologue is to establish the "rules" of a fictional world, i.e., a fantasy genre or science fiction genre novel that needs to establish the world and does so in the prologue.  Huh, again.  Shouldn't we see the world in the novel?

Funny thing is that prologues can be done extraordinarily well.

Canterbury Tales.  Frankenstein.  Scarlet Letter.

I'm going to go out on a limb:  I don't believe that prologues are out of style or out of vogue or whatever.

In the recent years, the plethora of writing flooded on the internet does not exercise the restraint or skill that we once demanded of fiction.  Now, prologues commonly become less of a writer's tool or literary device: now they can seem to be more of a crutch that writer's use to tell backstory or establish rules for fictional worlds.

I don't think this makes prologues intrinsically bad.  I believe that makes us cynical of the device.  When we do see prologues, we wonder if the writer is using it at some aim that is not as lofty as the prologue once was.

Oh, the lofty prologue.

Writing prompt: choose one of the following pictures below.  Write backstory, create a world, tell the history.  Pretend you are writing a prologue for the sake of an information dump or establishing the rules of a fictional world.  And for the sake of breaking the rules.

Give it a shot.